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1923 / 1980
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8 / xiv
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Esselmont expressed his gratitude to the Baha'i
historian, Avarih, who later left the faith and was declared
a Covenant-breaker. This reference was completely
removed.
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13 / 14
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"Miracles" were discussed which were intended to show how
civilization has advanced since the nineteenth century. Some
of these "miracles" have reversed and worsened since 1923.
They have been edited from the text.
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22 / 13
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The apostate Avarih was quoted, but his name has been
replaced by "a historian."
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28 / 20
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In the original, Esselmont's remarks seem to indicate
that the Bab was merely a forerunner to Baha'u'llah, a view
which was quite common at the beginning of this century.
Later editions reflect the current notion of the Bab and
Baha'u'llah being the "Co-founders of their Faith."
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34 / 26
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Avarih's material was dropped completely.
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39 / 33
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A quote of Avarih is left in the text, but his name was
removed.
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55-6 / 53-4
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Avarih provided a lengthy description of the marriage of
Abdu'l-Baha, which remains in later editions with Avarih's
name removed.
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67-9 / 67-9
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This is a very important change. Esselmont spoke of the
unique station of Abdu'l-Baha and stated that "whatever
Abdu'l-Baha says or does is to be accepted as of equal
authority with the direct utterance of the Manifestation."
Further, he quoted Abdu'l-Baha to the effect that the Bab
was "the 'Promised Christ.'" Two pages have been completely
reworked. The institution of the Guardianship was introduced
and the views which Esselmont originally expressed are
referred to as "naive enthusiasm."
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118 / 130
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Baha'u'llah provided that Abdu'l-Baha would be the sole
interpreter of his writings and after him the International
House of Justice, but this has been changed to "the
authorized interpreter." The institution of the Guardianship
was added in the 1937 edition (pg. 160) and it was clearly
stated that there would be "successive Guardians." However,
this section was changed again in the 1970 revision and
refers only to Shoghi Effendi as the Guardian, with no
mention of succession.
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123-4 / 135-7
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Esselmont was present when Abdu'l-Baha specifically
advocated a form of constitutional monarchy under the
heading "True Civilization." This quotation has been dropped
and replaced with two pages of general material which merely
says that there will be different types of government under
the Lesser Peace and the Most Great Peace.
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146 / 165-6
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Emphasis on the use of Esperanto as the universal
language is played down in later editions.
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157-8 / 179-9
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A detailed two page account of Spiritual Assemblies in
Persia by Jinab-i-Assad'llah Fadil Mazindarani has been
replaced by an updated description of functions.
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161 / 186
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Nineteen Day Feast was added.
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190 / 218
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The establishment of the League of Nations and reduction
in armaments were cited as "advances in fulfillment" of
prophecies of world peace. This statement has been
removed.
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203-4 / 235-7
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Esselmont claimed that Baha'u'llah's words have a
"creative power" and he cited a number of specific advances
as proof. He claimed that world temperance was advancing,
military dictatorships had fallen and will not be revived,
democracy was spreading, Esparanto was gaining worldwide
acceptance as a universal language, and the "emancipation of
the workers" was "steady and irresistible." This has been
rewritten in a more general fashion.
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209-10 / 244-7
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Under the heading of "Social Troubles After the War,"
Esselmont gave an eyewitness account of some specific
predictions by Abdu'l-Baha, which did not take place. This
section has been replaced by nearly three pages of general
information summing up Baha'u'llah's proclamation.
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211-12 / 249-50
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Abdu'l-Baha was quoted, asserting that the Kingdom of God
would be established in this century along with world peace
and a universal language, specifically by 1957. This section
has been replaced with material by Abdu'l-Baha which speaks
generally of the effect of the Baha'i Faith on the world. It
has been made to appear as if Esselmont was referring to the
progress of the movement at the one hundredth anniversary of
Baha'u'llah's declaration, or 1963. It is important to note
that this change was not made in the major revision in 1937,
but in the 1970 revision, after the events predicted did not
take place.
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215-6 / 253-4
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Avarih's estimates of the number of Baha'is worldwide
have been replaced. It is interesting to note that it was
the issue of dishonesty in the Baha'i administration over
the numerical success of the movement, which Avarih cited as
his reason for leaving the faith.
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228-9 / 287
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Esselmont supplied a bibliography for further study which
included books from a variety of authors, including Edward
G. Browne. In the 1937 edition it was removed completely,
but a new list of references is included at the end of later
editions. Although, Browne's material remains in the text,
his work is missing from the latest bibliography.
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Edition / Page No.
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Synopsis
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1957 / 1987
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5 / 7
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Ferraby dedicated his book to "The First Guardian of the
Baha'i Faith." In the later edition, Ferraby's dedication is
to "The Guardian." This is the first of many changes
concerning the perpetuity and indispensable nature of the
Guardianship.
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27-8 / 27-8
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Ferraby originally stated that the Guardianship was to be
perpetual, but this section has been reworked, explaining
that another Guardian could not be appointed since none were
qualified. All references to the duties of the Guardian were
in the present tense, but have been changed to the past
tense, indicating that the Guardianship has ceased.
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64 / 67
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Islam was said to be declining in influence and power in
the world and that this trend will continue. Because of
events in the Middle East during the past two decades, this
section has been rewritten, shifting the emphasis to a
decline in Islam's spirituality and reputation in the
world.
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246-7 / 252-3
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In the original edition, Ferraby quoted the Will of
Abdu'l-Baha and demonstrated that the Cause would continue
to have a visible Centre through the institution of
successive Guardians. He referred to this as "a Covenant so
mighty that mankind has never seen its like." However, this
section has been completely rewritten, stating that the Will
only provided for the "possibility" for a succession of
Guardians and that the writings nowhere "promise or
guarantee" that the institution would continue. The
Universal House of Justice is now presented as the "visible
centre."
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250-5 / 256-61
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The Will of Abdu'l-Baha and the Covenant were discussed.
References to the Guardian have been replaced or amended
with "the Universal House of Justice."
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256-62 / 262-72
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This section has undergone major revision with the
addition of hundreds of words. References to the
Guardianship have been changed to the past tense or have
been replaced with "the Universal House of Justice."
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272-4 / 288-90
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Ferraby extolled the virtues of the Baha'i Administrative
Order and cited evidences of its superiority over concepts
of authority in Christianity and Islam. Because of the
unexpected death of Shoghi Effendi, this information was
modified to a great extent, with the notion of the
hereditary Guardianship being played down.
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279 / 295
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Baha'i burial customs were discussed and Ferraby's
statement that "Cremation is forbidden, because the too
sudden disintegration of the body may harm the departed
soul" has been replaced with a statement by Abdu'l-Baha.
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308-12 / 326-31
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A number of books have been dropped from Ferraby's
bibliography, including those written by Edward G. Browne.
References to Browne's works still appear in the text of
later editions, but the notes refer the reader to books by
other Baha'i authors who also quote Browne. Two of the
Baha'i books referred to also contain material which is
critical of Browne, so these revisions were apparently made
to divert the reader from the primary sources, which contain
material that is at variance with orthodox versions of the
history of the movement.
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Edition / Page No.
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Synopsis
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1942 / 1975
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3 - 5 / vii
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The original edition began with nearly three pages of
excerpts from Abdu'l-Baha's Will and Testament, in which he
commanded his followers to "turn unto Shoghi Effendi...."
This has been reduced in the 1975 edition to two paragraphs
with statements concerning hereditary succession of the
Guardianship and the role of the Guardian as the Head of the
Universal House of Justice replaced with ellipses.
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10 / 4
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Two paragraphs have been removed, one of which deals
mainly with outdated statistics concerning the growth of the
Faith. The other is an assertion by Shoghi Effendi that he
was "appointed as First Guardian of the Baha'i Faith and
Head of the Universal House of Justice...."
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27-8 / 19
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A paragraph has been removed which described the
Administrative Order as "the framework of the Will [of
Abdu'l-Baha] itself, the inviolable stronghold...."
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43-5 / 32
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Two full pages have been removed, which formed an
apologetic for the functions, the centrality, and the
absolutely essential position of the Guardianship in
Baha'u'llah's World Order.
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